COP: PRACTICAL CRIT

During my crit today, I had my most up to date practical mock up receive some feedback in order to help me to develop it further. Most of the feedback I obtained was positive and I was given a couple of things I could experiment with to improve it further. A few things I will do to develop my idea in reflection of my research is to use less ink for sustainable reasons and to encourage the reader to use the website hand in hand. This will be done my using the patterns negative over some of the images, using less ink and hiding some of the image encouraging the reader to see the whole image on the site. I will also experiment with sizing the images down to a tiny scale for similar reasons. I could also try cutting the articles in half to the reader could be persuaded to finish the article online.